My Story !

Hey Guy's Im doing a story for school(L.a) and i dont know if it's good ! Plz tell Me what you think !

                                          Chapter 1
               “Fashion fades, only style remains the same.”
                                      
                                          August.30th
"Wow!" Sophie exclaimed,taking in the scene of her sweet thirteen party.Flashing disco lights and blaring music had transformed the Ball room into party central.
"Unbelievable!" Isabel said with awe as the girls stepped under an enormous rainbow made entirely of black, purple, and silver balloons. "Sophie totally deserves a nice party, but this—" Charlotte ducked as a paper cup decorated with hearts went sailing past her head. Sophie whistled and waved from a crowded stage. A beautiful crown on her head read Our Party Princess.

looking at the side of the cup , they discovered a Pink heart on the front that said"Read It"  with all the nights' activities that they did. There were directions to the front desk, the girls followed the direction's..."Surprise!!!","Were going to paris Guys !"Yelled Sophie—and that was just the beginning of it"Were going to boarding school there and your parent's gave you _...."Permisson that you guy's can all go." as Mr.watson finished Sophies sentence."were leaving 2morrow at 6:35 am,so pack your bag's and get ready for the time of you life's!". The Girls screamed and yelled all the way down the hall to the changing room,sophie threw of the lavender dress with glitter lines on the end."I can't Believe were going to Paris!"Charlotte Whisperd to rosie,"I Know i can't believe it...it's a dream come true".rosie explained
"Oh my,Sophie you look-....."
"stuning"
"amazing"
"Gorgeous"
"Funny?"said Allie
The blue tank dress was a shocker to everyone who knew sophie. It was covered with boring pale black flowers and oddly placed white bows, with not even a hint of glitter or purple, her signature shade. Purple is the only color I will ever wear when I'm a famous movie star, setting trends and making my own rules! Sophie decided. Sophie had spilled the entire dress saga to her best friends when they met up outside the party. It was either wear great-grandma's surprise birthday gift tonight or wear it for her own Bat Mitzvah. Wearing it tonight was definitely the night that she would be staying home, they all agreed!
                                           
                                          Chapter 2
 “In order to be irreplaceable one must always be different.”-coco chanel
                                        August.31st

"OMG!" Sophie yelped as she dodged the lipgloss, and of course isabel caught it.
"Rosie!" Isabel was about to throw the lipgloss back at her, but sophie grabbed her arm.
"All Flighter's that are going  to Paris Please start boarding plane 132,All flights to paris please start boarding Plane 132."
"Omg That's us"Exclaimed Isabel
The girls have all said goodbye to there parents who could not go any further than the gates,One by one the girls held hands.
Isabel,Sophie,Rosie,Charlotte and Allie,and so the five best friends waited for them to be called.
"kids with parental gurdians of ages 3-16 board the plane."
One by one the group of girls handed in there ticket's and boarded the plane.
To be contiued...........


Our teacher told us to do it like this then when she read's it we have to do the rest !